Post by roseman on Jul 12, 2009 23:11:22 GMT -5
Bright_Glow from My Little Pony Arena suggested this is where I should post my Moonshy story. Moonshy is my pony persona. Shes bright yellow with light and dark blue hair. Her eyes and bow are purple, but they both change a crimson, fire red if you make her angry. Her bow and eyes turn grey when shes scared on unhappy.
Before I start, many of you may know Starlight and BonBon's mums. I don't know their real names, so I made them up, but the actual pony characters belong to Hasbro, and I also made up the doctors and so on..
Criticism is welcome.. I love hearing people's opinions! I'm adding more nearly everyday! thanks
Before I start, many of you may know Starlight and BonBon's mums. I don't know their real names, so I made them up, but the actual pony characters belong to Hasbro, and I also made up the doctors and so on..
Chapter One
Indu sighed as Dr. Arnold walked in towards her through a large, white curtain. She smiled, carrying a piece of paper, of which Indu was most anxious about. "The results are brilliant, Mrs Ester! Your foals are strong and healthy and I can't see any sign of trouble for birthing. You should go into labour in about 2 to 3 days. Any later and we'll start to get worried, but we'll cross that bridge when we come to it! For now, you should relax!". Indu breathed out, "Good.." she murmured with a sense of relief. Within a few moments, a large light blue pony burst into the small curtain-surrounded room. "Did you hear Honey? The babies are fine! We should expect them in a few days.." Indu couldn't keep the excitement from her face. The blue pony was Indu's husband, Iceflow, and he smiled with relief as did Indu when she heard the news. "I'll leave you two alone.. I must cater for another expecting pair. I'll see you later on!", and with that, Dr. Arnold had disappeared and the thudding of her hooves slowly became fainter and fainter.
Indu felt her stomach eagerly, as if the baby might kick out at any moment, sending her into hysterical laughter. Iceflow was, too, a little shaky; as any first-time father may be when the arrival of his first children was only a few days away.
Another, younger, pony walked in, her hooves covered in gloves. She wore a Doctor's suit that smelled strongly of plastic and medicine. "Mr Ester, Mrs Ester," she greeted happily. "Hazel! Its good to see you have finally earned yourself a Doctor's Degree. It seemed like only yesterday you were starting university!" Iceflow kissed Hazel on the cheek. Hazel returned a thankful glance and turned to Indu. "We're going to have ask all visitors to leave for a while. Dr Arnold says you need to rest. You have a long few days ahead of you. Its good to see you both after so many a years," Hazel glanced over at Iceflow and he quickly got the message, scrambling out of the room. He looked over his shoulder and glanced at Indu once more, blew her a kiss and hurried out before Hazel became cranky at his disobedience. "I will check up on you in a few hours. Sleep.. I don't want you to get stressed.." Hazel slowly made for the curtain opening, resting her hoof on Indu's arm before she left. Hazel poked her head back in the room, before saying, "I'm going to open the curtains so you'll have some fresh air a bright light" Hazel stretched out her arm to lift open the white curtains, and just as she did, a stream of sunlight wavered inside. Hazel gave one last anxious glance, and trotted off down the hallway.
Indu breathed heavily as a burst of fresh, cold air pricked her cheeks. "So you're expecting, too, are you?" a sudden voice startled Indu, and she looked frightenedly to her side. "Oh, I'm sorry to startle you.. I just couldn't help but notice your belly. Are you expecting as well?" A dark pink pony with golden hair lay abreast to Indu. She smiled, "Yes. I'm due in about two days. And you?" Indu graciously smiled as not to offend the pony if she were not in foal. "I'm due in about three days.. perhaps four. Is this your first one? I'm Mrs. Chester by the way!" Mrs Chester grinned happily as if she enjoyed the sound of her name. "Oh.. I'm Mrs Ester. Yes, these are my first!" The pony on the left of Indu, who was obviously listening intently, burst out, "These are you first? You mean your having twins!? Oh, how marvellous!" The pony was light caramel in colour and she had a picture of a cake as her symbol. "Two!? You're really expecting two foals?" Mrs Chester was beaming with joy. "Yes, yes! My husband an I were, too, a bit shocked when we heard the news, but I'm expecting two foals" Indu smiled sweetly at the two ponies. "Oh, I'm sorry, I'm Mrs Sweetcakes! I'm only expecting one, luckily, I don't know if I'd cope with two.." Mrs Sweetcakes giggled, picturing the very thought of twin ponies. Mrs Chested reached over to feel Indu's mane. "Why, you have lovely hair. I own a hair salon, you know. You should visit sometime!" Indu grinned, "Oh, I've heard of that salon! Ponies say its the best in Ponyland.." Mrs Sweetcakes nodded excitedly. "It is, dear! And its attatched to an Ice Creame Shoppe! The girls and I used to go there when Mrs Chester's parents owned it! We should go sometime!" Indu laughed happily again. "Yes we should! It sounds like a lovely place..". "How about next week?" Mrs Chester proposed. Before either Indu of Mrs Sweetcakes could reply, Dr Arnold walked in through the hallway. "I see you're enjoying yourself, Mrs Ester." She nodded to the two others, who waved sheepishly.
Indu sighed as Dr. Arnold walked in towards her through a large, white curtain. She smiled, carrying a piece of paper, of which Indu was most anxious about. "The results are brilliant, Mrs Ester! Your foals are strong and healthy and I can't see any sign of trouble for birthing. You should go into labour in about 2 to 3 days. Any later and we'll start to get worried, but we'll cross that bridge when we come to it! For now, you should relax!". Indu breathed out, "Good.." she murmured with a sense of relief. Within a few moments, a large light blue pony burst into the small curtain-surrounded room. "Did you hear Honey? The babies are fine! We should expect them in a few days.." Indu couldn't keep the excitement from her face. The blue pony was Indu's husband, Iceflow, and he smiled with relief as did Indu when she heard the news. "I'll leave you two alone.. I must cater for another expecting pair. I'll see you later on!", and with that, Dr. Arnold had disappeared and the thudding of her hooves slowly became fainter and fainter.
Indu felt her stomach eagerly, as if the baby might kick out at any moment, sending her into hysterical laughter. Iceflow was, too, a little shaky; as any first-time father may be when the arrival of his first children was only a few days away.
Another, younger, pony walked in, her hooves covered in gloves. She wore a Doctor's suit that smelled strongly of plastic and medicine. "Mr Ester, Mrs Ester," she greeted happily. "Hazel! Its good to see you have finally earned yourself a Doctor's Degree. It seemed like only yesterday you were starting university!" Iceflow kissed Hazel on the cheek. Hazel returned a thankful glance and turned to Indu. "We're going to have ask all visitors to leave for a while. Dr Arnold says you need to rest. You have a long few days ahead of you. Its good to see you both after so many a years," Hazel glanced over at Iceflow and he quickly got the message, scrambling out of the room. He looked over his shoulder and glanced at Indu once more, blew her a kiss and hurried out before Hazel became cranky at his disobedience. "I will check up on you in a few hours. Sleep.. I don't want you to get stressed.." Hazel slowly made for the curtain opening, resting her hoof on Indu's arm before she left. Hazel poked her head back in the room, before saying, "I'm going to open the curtains so you'll have some fresh air a bright light" Hazel stretched out her arm to lift open the white curtains, and just as she did, a stream of sunlight wavered inside. Hazel gave one last anxious glance, and trotted off down the hallway.
Indu breathed heavily as a burst of fresh, cold air pricked her cheeks. "So you're expecting, too, are you?" a sudden voice startled Indu, and she looked frightenedly to her side. "Oh, I'm sorry to startle you.. I just couldn't help but notice your belly. Are you expecting as well?" A dark pink pony with golden hair lay abreast to Indu. She smiled, "Yes. I'm due in about two days. And you?" Indu graciously smiled as not to offend the pony if she were not in foal. "I'm due in about three days.. perhaps four. Is this your first one? I'm Mrs. Chester by the way!" Mrs Chester grinned happily as if she enjoyed the sound of her name. "Oh.. I'm Mrs Ester. Yes, these are my first!" The pony on the left of Indu, who was obviously listening intently, burst out, "These are you first? You mean your having twins!? Oh, how marvellous!" The pony was light caramel in colour and she had a picture of a cake as her symbol. "Two!? You're really expecting two foals?" Mrs Chester was beaming with joy. "Yes, yes! My husband an I were, too, a bit shocked when we heard the news, but I'm expecting two foals" Indu smiled sweetly at the two ponies. "Oh, I'm sorry, I'm Mrs Sweetcakes! I'm only expecting one, luckily, I don't know if I'd cope with two.." Mrs Sweetcakes giggled, picturing the very thought of twin ponies. Mrs Chested reached over to feel Indu's mane. "Why, you have lovely hair. I own a hair salon, you know. You should visit sometime!" Indu grinned, "Oh, I've heard of that salon! Ponies say its the best in Ponyland.." Mrs Sweetcakes nodded excitedly. "It is, dear! And its attatched to an Ice Creame Shoppe! The girls and I used to go there when Mrs Chester's parents owned it! We should go sometime!" Indu laughed happily again. "Yes we should! It sounds like a lovely place..". "How about next week?" Mrs Chester proposed. Before either Indu of Mrs Sweetcakes could reply, Dr Arnold walked in through the hallway. "I see you're enjoying yourself, Mrs Ester." She nodded to the two others, who waved sheepishly.
Criticism is welcome.. I love hearing people's opinions! I'm adding more nearly everyday! thanks
